Fiction: Dominant Lady Seeking Handsome Gentleman
Free Thinking Writer has a new story posted on Femdom Fantasies. For a taste:
At work, you’re the one in charge. When you come home to me, you crave to let go, to surrender to my control. You relish the opportunity to please. You seek my strong hand, adore my quick wit, and appreciate the shiver of restraint. My love, isn’t it time we meet? I’ll order the wine.
Free Thinking Writer has a way of always leaving me wanted more with his stories and this is no exception.
Arafin has also submitted a new story, "Telling Fortunes", a wonderfully creative tale. His imagination is something that I truly envy as it yields stories that are always unique and a pleasure to read.
I'm sure you'll also enjoy reading their submissions ;)
I'll be adding more stories over the next few days so check back again soon if you're a femdom fantasy fan.
Labels: Femdom Fantasies, Fiction
posted by Lady Julia @ 5:30 PM
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As a submissive man who's not in charge at work. Lines that start that way are frustrating. And not in a good way
A Nightcap of Vintage Wine
The light that shimmers red
through your glass of wine,
your words that come and go,
your whispers that excite
and dominate my ego,
all combine to make me
explore the concept of slavery,
to you and your need.
When I wake from that reverie,
I find that something has happened -
I am your slave in name and deed.
The candle gutters down
and I have a choice that is no choice.
I beg you to lead me down
and condition me with sexual fire
that burns but does not consume
or provide the weakness of release.
You have discovered my true self,
submissive and so eager
to please your every desire.
I am blinded by my need
to serve you.
I am drugged by the smell
of the perfume of your skin.
You have relieved my thoughts
of any reason but yours.
Let me remain your creature thus,
hypnotized in thrall,
forever driven to fulfill
your every sexual purpose.
I'm sorry about that, Unspeakable. Not every story is going to fit every person.
There are a set of men whose desire for submission at home is driven in counterpart to the jobs these men hold.
As a writer, I can only drift so far from myself. I write from the male perspective better than I do from the female perspective, for instance. Variety in character require I push my abilities, but I don't know if I could ever do a good job writing from the perspective of someone in your position. If I tried, I suspect it would come across very stilted and false. Similarly, I don't think I would do a good job writing from the perspective of someone living in the inner city, an immigrant, or someone on the lower end of the intelligence scale. These are so far from my own experience, I wouldn't know how to begin or have a clue if I were getting it right. I also couldn't write about wanting to give or receive pain or humiliation -- these just aren't part of my mindset, and I couldn't get it right.
When I send stories to Lady Julia, she almost always ends up writing back something like, "If you have questions from the woman's perspective, I'm happy to help." I usually feel this is maybe a subtle hint that I'm not getting it right (along with, of course, an honest offer of assistance on this and future stories). But by the time I send her something, I'm pretty burnt out on the story (at least for now), and I'm left not even knowing what I can fix. So I don't know what questions to ask.
I usually feel if I got it egregiously wrong, she would be more direct. :-)
So, I'm sorry this story wasn't for you. As a writer, I win some, I lose some. All I can do is try to learn and get better at what I do.
Beautiful, Palimpsest :)
I usually feel this is maybe a subtle hint that I'm not getting it right.
Never once have I had this thought.
(along with, of course, an honest offer of assistance on this and future stories).
That would be it :)
GREAT stories. I hope you both write more.
Excellent. Both well written and interesting.
Until I read your story I never thought that dominant women would have to do a personal ad to find a partner. Interesting concept.
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